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Still is the Wind by ~ravenend:iconravenend:



A dreadful wind came seeking me,
On a night of June while I was asleep.
She embraced my soul and allowed me to see,
The darkest fears in my minds I keep.

I shook and shivered, closed my eyes,
Tried to run and held on to the lies;
But she roared in rage and shoved me ashore
From where I saw the sea of yore.

The waves spelled names from heaven and hell,
Of love and hate, of wilting friends,
Of nights I spent and relationships I help bend
And of times I thought my life ends.

I cried, I wept, told her I regret
Yet she held onto me until I accept
My lies, my fears, my mistakes and suicide threats,
The world I cursed for wars and deaths.

The waves sung in chorus, consuming me,
Occupying my mind with whom I sinned
Then she woke me from the dream and carried me alee,
To her surreal lair, between heaven and hell,
Now still is the wind...
©2009 ~ravenend
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Author's Comments

I thought of the title first, and than the content. I usually write first the content and then title it aptly. I guess I have forced this poem to end. Rhyme is partly accoustic partly linguistic. Might be going through it now and then for a while.

It is about a man, crazy, cruel, yet afraid. Yes, he dies too.

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Great work bro.. as always!

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